A Day's Wait

“He came into the room to shut the windows while we were still in bed and I saw he looked ill.”

This introductory sentence provides the first characterization of Schatz. First, he’s self-sufficient, taking care of a problem (the open window) without asking for help. Second, it provides the first indication that Schatz is ill. Additionally, this is the first ellipsis in the story. The “we” hints that other people, most likely female, are in the house, though they never make an appearance.

“He was shivering, his face was white, and he walked slowly as though it ached to move.”

The only physical descriptions of Schatz include descriptions of how he responds to his illness. This quote provides imagery that conveys how sick the child looks. In addition, it provides characterization that reveals Schatz’s strength as he moves around despite feeling miserable.

“‘What’s the matter, Schatz?’

‘I’ve got a headache.’

‘You better go back to bed.’

‘No. I’m all right.’”

Thus begins the many miscommunications in this work. Schatz isn’t all right, but he’s trying desperately not to bother anyone. Meanwhile, the narrative reveals that Papa is concerned but does a terrible job showing it. He simply tells the boy to go back to bed as though he’s a bother.